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Сообщение от Hellga

Так, вот это - текст письма (без эпиграфа) с моими комментариями.

Сейчас я буду комментировать комментарии. Но совсем немного, можно не бояться. В основном со всем согласна, ты как раз и переписала всю ту корявость, на которую я махнула рукой, а где-то просто не слышала, потому что живу всё-таки не в англоязычной стране. Пара комментариев:

- Про work a miracle/make a miracle: странно, мне всё время попадается именно work a miracle, make a miracle звучит как калька с русского. Беглый гугл уверил меня, что таки work a miracle – ok, но пусть будет magic, если возникают разночтения.

We shelter in our hearts – лично я бы предпочла have a soft spot in our hearts, shelter странно звучит – укрываете от какой опасности или невзгод?

Тут я как автор конкретно этих строк (остальное я только правила) хочу сказать, что таки именно это я и имела в виду. Это, возьму на себя смелость сказать, коллективное отношение к данному персонажу части наших сопалатниц. Так что пусть звучит странно, мы именно это ему и предлагаем. Та же логика в случае с himself/his own soul в последнем абзаце; tragically (там именно оно) и run-on sentence: я знаю, что это нехорошо, но не хочу разбивать мысль.

Вот про cost of his life - есть нюанс, он вроде бы не жертвует прямо-таки своей жизнью, просто ему это боком выходит. Был у меня глюк, что такое мне попадалось, но значит, глюк, пусть тогда будет at all costs.

- Scritpwriters/screenwriters: очевидно, британский/американский вариант. В интервью и РА, и Камбербэтча мне сплошь встречались scriptwriters (но слитно, это да). И даже профорганизация у них есть, так и называется Scriptwriter Network.

И ещё в абзаце про роли поменяла кое-что местами - так кажется логичнее.

Итого:

Dear Mr. Armitage,

If you are reading this letter, it means that our dreams have finally come true via DHL working its magic connecting Moscow with the land of "far, far away"! We, a group of your Russian fans, have finally resolved to let you know about our existence, and our deep appreciation of your talent, and great respect for you as an actor and a wonderful person.

Yes, in far-away Russia you have your own group of admirers, quite numerous and very loyal, who have been following your work for quite a while now. We are not only from Moscow and Saint Petersburg, but from all over our huge country. Just look at the map of Russia – and everywhere you see, at least one of us is bowing and saying “Thank you!” and “At your service!” Moreover, some of our members are Russians and Russian speakers who live in France, Belarus, Ukraine, Latvia, Moldova, Kazakhstan, Kyrgyzstan, UAE and other far-flung countries. Nevertheless, this letter is from all of us, brought together by your talent, from all our loving hearts!

We know and love all your roles: we have watched breathlessly and in awe as Thorin, dignified and tragic, ran down the burning log towards his enemy; as dark and brooding Guy of Gisborne mourned his lost love; as the king of the factory Mr. Thornton with desperation and heart breaking longing whispered to his lady “Look back, look back at me"…. We have watched and discussed the Impressionists ad infinitum. Need we say that now we can easily name all the works of Claude Monet and talk for hours about shades and light in his magical paintings? We loved the drama of Sparkhouse and the hilarity of The Vicar of Dibley – your on-screen chemistry with the wonderful Dawn French is amazing! We shelter in our hearts John Porter - courageous, displaying glimpses of Thorin’s majesty in the most dangerous and desperate circumstances, never losing his human heart and dignity, making the right choice again and again at all costs. We cannot let go of Lucas – a mesmerizing, haunting character, unbroken but tragically unhappy and suffering at the hands of adversaries and scriptwriters alike, stoically wearing his black coat in the oppressive heat of Moscow summer.

And of course, we are eagerly awaiting and begging for more! You have truly a great talent, Mr. Armitage, and we do hope that with each upcoming year you will honour us with new films and new characters – always different, yet ever deep and captivating. For our part, we will keep our fingers crossed for you – for your creative success and happiness in your profession!

From the bottom of our hearts we wish all the projects you have been dreaming about to come true, and certainly the project about Richard the Third among them. There are a number of people in Russia who really care about the tragic fate of this outstanding king and have a huge desire to see his good name restored. Seeing your enthusiasm and interest in his person, they hope that with your help it can be done.

But above all, we want to wish you a successful completion of filming of The Hobbit movie. We are also hoping to see you back in Russia some day!

We love your films, but – ok, let’s be honest here – we also love you, Mr. Armitage, as a wonderful, kind, and friendly person who puts a bit of his own soul into each of his characters. There are many talented and good-looking actors in this world, but our hearts belong only to you, and for a good reason. From your interviews we know that you have a noble, considerate and charismatic heart, full of dignity and warmth. The way you behave with the press and the fans, which are falling on you like a tsunami, is a great example of delicate humour, modesty and respect for everyone around you.

Thank you for being such a nice person!