"Frodo’s song farewell

Look my eyes it’s way I can explain,
See my mind it’s coming mad again,
Know my friends I have to tell you both,
Get away this sorrow is not yours.

Sam you might have known I wasn’t right.
Merry please forgive me I’ll be quite,
Life is just a way to turn us down,
Lets you go your ways in spite of drown."

Negramotno. Avtor ne znaet anglijskogo yazyka.

Rebyata, davajte vy snachala nauchites' gramotno pisat' - eta zadacha prosche, chem slagat' stixi. Odolejte snachala shkol'nyj kurs russkogo ili zhe vyuchite anglijskij _na urovne nositelya yazyka_.

Kakie-to detskie illuzii, chto stixi pisat' legche, chem shkol'nye sochineniya. Kto vam eto skazal?